Talk:Twix

A meaningful example is helpful, so I suggest the following:

Katja likes to eat the Twix candy bar during work to get her inner peace. — This unsigned comment was added by Da Vinci Nanjing (talk • contribs).

• How does that help our readers understand the meaning of the word? SemperBlotto (talk) 15:31, 22 April 2017 (UTC)

Semperblotto, thx for your comments for improvement.

For a lot of terms in Wiktionary there is an example sentence given. If you are not satisfied with my explanatory sentence, do you wanna suggest a another/better one? Additionally it would be possible to use my example sentence and the one added from you.

Twix has nothing to do with inner peace; the suggested sentence is irrelevant. I have replaced it with a real book citation from real-world usage. Equinox ◑ 17:21, 22 April 2017 (UTC)

No native speaker of English talks or writes like that. Users don't need examples of stilted, unnatural usage. Chuck Entz (talk) 23:57, 22 April 2017 (UTC)

How about this example sentence:

Katja loves to eat Twix.

This could be included in addition to the quotation made by Equinox. — This unsigned comment was added by Da Vinci Nanjing (talk • contribs).

• No, it's pointless - adds nothing to anyone's understanding of the word. SemperBlotto (talk) 13:39, 23 April 2017 (UTC)